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PostSubject: Mart's poems   Fri May 26, 2017 5:14 pm

I've never been one for writing poetry but have produced a few. Not in any way very profound but here's one:

A moment in time has just gone
T'was there but a moment ago
The moment now is a new one
But soon even that one will go

It's now been replaced by another
The last one just upped and went
It will stay for only a moment
Until another one's sent.

Life's a collection of moments
In which all our actions are caught
We only get a few million moments
Now there's a depressing thought.


and here's another:

I went inside our shed
And found a bee, stone dead
What a shame it had to die
Never more to buzz and fly

No more making honey
That ends up in a tummy
Or flying around some ears
Having fun with human fears

Gone from the nest for hours
After visiting the flowers
It must have caused a buzz
Like missing family does

Lots of words in ‘bee’ were said
But I bet no ‘bzzzz’ ever lead
To the fact the bee just flew inside
Our shed and simply went and died.

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PostSubject: Re: Mart's poems   Fri May 26, 2017 9:05 pm

Well I think they are profound Mart!  What's more profound than a moment in time and a bees funeral.

Civilisation is a veneer, easily soluble in alcohol!
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PostSubject: Re: Mart's poems   Sat May 27, 2017 5:51 am

Quite agree Cider ... full marks Mart. Your talent knows no bounds. yes
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